Tuesday, August 08, 2006

How would you say it...?

I would like to hear how would you translate the first three lines of the first Canto of Dante's "The Divine Comedy", just for fun. Try to do it first without looking at my and other famous writers translations.(Joke). If you prefer you can write an anecdote of a time when you felt just like Dante did.

Nel mezzo del cammin di nostra vita
mi ritrovai per una selva oscura,
ché la diritta via era smarrita


In the midst of our life's journey,
I found myself wandering in a dark forest
where the straight road was lost ( Kelly Mellars)

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In the middle of our life's walk
I found myself in a dark wood
for the straight road was lost
(John D. Sinclair)

In the middle of the journey of our life
I came to myself within a dark wood
where the straight way was lost.
(John D. Sinclair)

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Midway in the course of our life
I found myself within a dark wood,
where the right way was lost.
(Rev. H.F. Tozer)
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Midway upon the journey of our life
I found myself within a forest dark,
For the straightforward pathway had been lost.
(Henry Longfellow)
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5 Comments:

Blogger Freezerburntbrit said...

Nell, a mestiza maid, was coming back to life,
She hid herself on an obscure shelf,
Although a little dirty she was a samaritan.

11:55 PM  
Blogger Jamie said...

There's really no competing with papa.

None at all...

10:12 AM  
Blogger kelly said...

Darling that was hilarious!
I see where your children get their talent for BSing their way around from; nevertheless I laughed my head off
The score goes:
Top marks for entertaining value.
0 for accuracy, I am afraid.

10:16 AM  
Blogger Freezerburntbrit said...

Eh?

8:03 PM  
Blogger Freezerburntbrit said...

Further Adventures of Nell

Nell quickly tired of the obscure shelf so she jumped down onto the floor. However being a maid she of course cleaned the shelf before leaving, and stole one or two things for her own house.
She walked outside and found herself in a dark wood with a rather strange looking chap wondering around and saying that he was lost.

To be continued

12:02 AM  

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